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Tuesday, September 18, 2018

Enigmatic Fantasies #1 - The Woman From Lochmere Lane Part 1 [#31]

This is easily the longest story I've written for this blog, to the point I had to split it into two parts. Buckle up, this is going to be a long one. Also, for ease of reference, (~~~~) indicates the beginning and end of the story content, while (~--~) is a scene transition.
Also, if you haven't already, be sure to read this update about the changes to my update schedule: http://30leaves.blogspot.com/2018/09/the-new-schedule.html
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            As you drove further up the unfamiliar country road, you resisted the urge to glance at the newspaper in your passenger seat. You couldn't believe what happened, it made no sense for your friend to up and die like that. They had already acted strangely for the past several months, but you never expected this would be the result. Nobody has any straight answers on what happened, and the police dismissed it as a suicide. You only caught a glimpse of the body, but even you could tell that was no suicide. There's only one person you know of that could possibly have answers.
            You double check the note you tapped to your dashboard, "Valencia, 555-2368, 1919 Lochmere Lane." Your friend said that he frequently talked to this woman for advice. Although, he never specified what kind of advice. Regardless, she was the only one he has confided in for the past few months. She might be the single person who knows what really happened to him.
            Finally, you pull up to a gated driveway. Flanked by a black, iron fence that extended outward until it was swallowed by an adjacent tree line. Inscribed into the gate was, "1919," right next to an intercom. You pulled up your car and hopped out and wiped your brow as you exposed yourself to the hot summer evening. Before you could even touch the intercom it flared to life. "We've been expecting you," a distorted voice echoed from the device as the gate opened up by itself. Undeterred, you jumped back in your car and drove onward.
            After almost a minute you arrived at a circular driveway which sat beneath a massive, three-story mansion. Illuminated by the setting sun. You parked your car, grabbed the newspaper and made your way to the entrance. You were surprised to see the house was mostly dark. The only sign of life was a dim light that glowed from a second-floor window. As you approached the door it opened without warning. On the other side was an older, gray-streaked man, dressed to the nines in a suit and vest. His medium length black hair was slicked back, and his face was decorated with a pair of spectacles.
            "Welcome," he greeted you with a bow, "Valencia will see you now." He beckoned you forward, and you followed. Inside you entered into the mansion's foyer. Marked with a single grand staircase that lead to the second floor. The man lead you up the grand staircase, which felt like an eternity in of itself, and a sharp left into the second floor. You continued into a vast network of halls, the man took you through random turns. Yet, no matter when or where you turned, each time it felt like a wholly different part of the mansion.
            Eventually, you reached the end of the labyrinth of hallways. Signified by an intricate wooden door painted white and gold. The man opened this door, then turned to you and bowed, beckoning you in. As you entered the room, the door swiftly shut behind you. Now apparently locked inside, your attention was drawn to the figure at the other end of the room.
            Behind a magnificent wooden desk, beneath an ornate window that had a view of the moon that rose in the distance, was a woman who worked by candlelight. She had chocolate brown hair and a pale complexion. She wore a simple, white dress and was wrapped up in a thick, white coat, lined with brown fleece. A white hat, also lined with brown fleece, sat on the desk in front of her.
            "Please take a seat," she looked up from her work and gestured at a chair in front of her desk. You accepted her offer and sat down. As you got a close look you began to make out the few, noticeable wrinkles that lined her face. As well as her dull, lifeless blue-eyes. "So I assume you're here to discuss our mutual acquaintance?" She asked you.
            You responded with the newspaper, the headline displayed your friend's untimely demise.
            "I was afraid something like this might happen," she sighed as she brushed aside her work. "I warned him of the consequences of his actions, but it might have been too late for him by then."
            You raised an eyebrow at this.
            "Let me guess," the women, Valencia, continued. "You want to know what happened to them, but nobody will give you a straight answer."
            You nodded.
            "I figured," she pulled out a pack of cigarettes, "tell me how much do you know about your friend's hobbies?"
            You shrugged, you had no idea what she meant.
            "Well let me ask you this," she pulled out a cigarette, "do you believe in magic?"
            You shook your head.
            "Your friend certainly did," she offered you a cigarette, which you declined. "To put it simply, he got in too deep, too quickly and paid for it."
            You raised your eyebrow again.
            "Don't give me that look," she placed the cigarette in her mouth, "I told you the truth, isn't that what you wanted?"
            You grimaced, you wanted to know the truth, but this sounded ridiculous.
            "Well then, do you want the full story?" She pulled out a lighter, "That may take some time, are you comfortable?"
            You nodded.
            "Good," she lit the cigarette and took a long inhale. "Now where to begin," she exhaled the smoke, thankfully away from your face. "Let me start with the first time I met your dear friend. From the very start, I noticed a problem."
~--~
            I first met your friend about three months ago. I'd received an anonymous tip about them dabbling in forces they couldn't begin to understand. It had been a while since I had made a house call, so to speak. Thus, I decided to visit your friend personally.
            Me and my assistant Walter, you've met him already, pulled up to your friend's house. It at first seemed unassuming. It appeared as a simple, suburban home. No more special than the dozens of other near identical homes that lined the neighborhood. However, I've been around the block enough times to know that didn't mean anything. It was after we knocked on the door and he answered that I noticed the issue.
            I have no knowledge of what your friend looked like before, but it was obvious that something was wrong with him. His thin, gaunt face, his colorless, dull eyes. An uneven skin complexion and faded hair color were all symptoms I've seen a million times. However, I'm getting ahead of myself.
            Right away he asked me, "What do you want?"
            So I told him, "I know what you've been dabbling in. I'm here to warn you before it's too late." He scoffed at me, but I got his attention back when I asked him, "So where did you find the book? You take it from some dark corner of your local library?" That made him pale, and he finally agreed to hear me out.
            Once we were situated in his tiny living room I spelled out my warning as simple and straightforward as possible. "If you continue down this path, you will die."
            He took this as a threat and warned me to, "...Get out or I'll call the cops!"
            I revealed to him that, "Not even the police will be able to help you if you keep messing with that book." This information calmed him down a bit, and I was able to glean some information out of him. He explained that he found the book in a box of his late grandfather's belongings a month or so prior, and began to curiously glance through it. He believed he was on the verge of uncovering some great power within the book.
            Now I know you're skeptical about this, how could a book influence your friend's health? It's simple, his grandfather, or another close relative, was involved in some variety of dark arts. Sadly, I never had a chance to see the book for myself, so I have no idea what particular brand of magic was at play. I have my theories though, it was probably some type of blood magic or even demon summoning.
            I informed him that the book, "...Will destroy you from the inside out. I suggest you bury it out in the woods and forget about it."
            He shook his head and affirmed, "I'm so close, I can't stop now."
            I repeated myself, "If you continue down this path, you will die." Then I got up and left. It was out of my hands. I came only to warn him, and he refused to heed my warnings. "Whatever happens next is your fault," I told him as I exited.
~--~
            "I honestly thought he'd lose his nerve at that point. Most do when I warn them," Valencia said as she took another puff of her cigarette. "I thought myself incapable of being naive at this point, but even I couldn't predict how far your friend would fall."
            You refused to meet her gaze.
            "Now, now no need to question the validity of my story just yet," she wagged her cigarette at you, "There is still more to tell."
            You look back at her.
            "I had thought that interaction would be the end of my dealings with your unfortunate friend," she continued. "But a month later we crossed paths by chance, and for the first time in a long time I began to pity someone."

~--~
            I had recently closed a particularly difficult case up in a nearby city. I was on the lookout for somewhere to either drown my sorrows or clear my head. Whichever came first. That's when I caught the sight of your friend. Despite the darkness of the night, it took only a glance at his face to be certain it was him. He was fare worse for wear, his skin was paling, his face was even gaunter and his eyes half-lidded and dull. I have no idea why he was in the city, but he appeared lost and disoriented.
            "I warned you did I not," I approached him. He didn't respond right away, he only managed to stare back at me for a good few minutes.
            When he finally spoke it was less than pleasant, "Are you following me?" His voice was chalky and parched, I presume he had begun to neglect food and drink.
            I didn't answer his question, "Every second you continue forward on this path is another second closer to your premature demise." He responded with an incoherent mumble. Which wasn't a surprise, long-term exposure to any form of dark arts tends to eat away at the mind. It can be manageable in measured doses, but your friend had failed to take that precaution.
            Now I'm no saint, nor am I even a good Samaritan. However, as I watched your friend on the verge of self-destruction, a rare feeling emerged in the shriveled up remains of my heart. Pity. I knew that there was no point in arguing with him. He was too far gone for that, but there was another way to bring him to his senses.
            I pulled a slip of paper from my person and handed it to him. "Takes this, if you need advice just call the number written here," I told him. He took the paper into his shaking hands and held it to his chest. "I recommend that you slow down your research for the time being. At least until you get your wits about you," I stated before I left him to his own devices. As I walked away into the night, he remained there with the paper clutched to his chest. Still shaking, still mumbling, even as I pulled out of sight.
~--~
            "On any other night, I would have left him to suffer in silence. But I needed to appeal to my conscience for personal reasons," Valencia explained. "It was a fifty-fifty chance he would actually call. Which mostly hinged on whether he actually got home that night."
            You scowled but said nothing.
            "As I'm sure you know he did call back," she flicked some ash off her cigarette, "and for the briefest moment I thought he might save himself." 

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TO BE CONTINUED
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I hope you enjoy the debut of my new anthology series, Enigmatic Fantasies.
Part 2: http://30leaves.blogspot.com/2018/09/enigmatic-fantasies-woman-from-lochmere_20.html

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