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Tuesday, July 28, 2026

"Free Will is Overrated" - Illusions to the Heavens, Part 2 of 2

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            Axin ran and ran and ran. Even as the light seemed to dim more and more, even as he stumbled over every loose tile and crashed into the walls, he refused to stop for anything. At least until he careened into the dead end at the far end of the hall. It had simultaneously felt like he had been running forever and for no time at all. Dazed, delirious, and completely disoriented, he was forced to take a moment to recenter himself and finally realized he had run too far and missed the turn. Thankfully, there didn’t seem to be anyone following him. Not so thankfully, the hall was eerily quiet as even the distant sound of the crowd had vanished. Optimistically, that would mean everyone had suddenly left, but realistically, that meant something was very wrong.

            ‘I didn’t…I mean I couldn’t have…’ Axin considered what he had witnessed. If anything was a divine messenger, it was whatever he saw, but that can’t be right. He knew it was all a trick, just advanced tech on this primitive planet, yet that…Creature? Being? Entity?...whatever it was spoke directly into his mind, seemingly by accident. He had heard vague whispers of such otherworldly abilities, but that was the result of science gone wrong and freak mutations. That ‘existence’ was anything but scientific or a mutant. It just was.

            ‘Leaving now, never looking back. I’ll just live in the mountains or something until I die of old age,’ Axin affirmed. It wasn’t a real plan, but despite the fact he intended it to be a bit of dark humor to lighten his mood, he found his desire to be as far away from this place as possible all too real. Without another thought, he retraced his steps to the door that led him into this cursed hallway and opened it up to an empty corridor. The cathedral was deathly silent, and the once bustling and overcrowded pathway that brought him from the outside was empty. ‘This looks too good to be true,’ he realized.

            He took one step, then another, then another before quickly dashing to the end of the hall, intending to peer down the way he came to ensure the coast was clear. Instead, he was seized by several pairs of hands from around the opposite corner. Axin flailed for a moment thinking he was being taken, but one look at his supposed captors and he realized they were just regular worshippers.

            “Ah, a late arrival. Forgive us, we heard you running and thought the worst,” a middle-aged woman at the head of the group said. “Do not fret, the service only began a very short time ago. Please come along with us, no one will judge you for being a tad tardy.”

            “I’m not-” Axin tried to say, but was dragged along before he could get another word out. He wanted to struggle free, but was stuck between five people who were practically dragging him along. The rogue couldn’t tell if they were being malicious or just incredibly pushy. His first instinct was to assume the worst, but he knew how fanatical some people are. In their mind, they’re helping him. The thought made Axin wretch, but alas, he still couldn’t break free.

            Taken into the main hall, Axin bore witness to the grand majesty of the cathedral. The ceiling seemed impossibly far away, and the intricate paintings and murals lining each wall looked far too detailed to have been created in the short time it took to build the cathedral. Despite the uniform layout packed to the gills with worshippers, everything felt just a little off. Not just in an eerie or creepy way, but in the sense that it was all slightly wrong and misaligned. It wasn’t even that it appeared rushed, poorly made, or malicious, just that on some subtle level, the cathedral wasn’t put together correctly. Axin was being pulled along too quickly to be able to notice any of the fine details, but the longer he saw this place, the more he sensed the inherent wrongness.

            ‘I swear there’s something crooked about this place, literally crooked,’ Axin could feel the revelation just beneath the surface of his thoughts. He knew it on some level, but it hadn’t reached his conscious mind yet. However, before he could make the connection, the whole room became alight with rapture as the prophet reappeared by a podium at the far end of the room.

            “Fellow believers, the word of the divine messenger is near,” the prophet exclaimed, “they asked for but one more thing before the message is shared. I shall not be the one to disseminate the message. It will be one of you!” The crowd of worshippers, dead silent not even a moment before, went into absolute hysterics. “Let the light of our goddess illuminate the chosen!” The prophet shouted.

            ‘Just what I needed, an even wilder crowd, and audience participation,’ Axin grit his teeth. ‘What poor sap is going to be dragged into…this…?’ The dusty-haired man suddenly felt very seen as all eyes followed a single spot of light that focused on the area he was standing in, slowly closing in on the group he was stuck with before tightening to a single point centered on him. ‘I had to ask.’

            Everyone in the cathedral stared at him. A mixture of awe, wonder, envy, hatred, and joy was poured directly onto his being. Axin felt sick to his stomach as the prophet beckoned him forward. He wanted to run, to flee, to scream and demand them all to leave him alone, and he very might well have, but he was still trapped by that middle-aged lady and her friends and more importantly…

            “Come, the Divine Messenger awaits you,” the prophet said directly to Axin, and this small, insidious part of himself burned with the desire to accept. He wanted to see it again, he needed to see it again. You can’t just go back to the life you had before when you witness a being like that. By the time Axin returned to his senses, he was already halfway to the podium.

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            While Axin wasn’t dragged into the backroom of the cathedral, it certainly felt like it. He was roughly deposited into a clean, white, marble room, the roar of the excited worshippers eerily muted since he entered. The room was decorated with more objects and ornaments of worship for this enigmatic goddess the prophet was going on about, but most striking was the pool of crystal-clear water that served as the centerpiece.

            “Welcome, blessed child,” the prophet began to speak. “You have been chosen to bear the divine goddess’s gifts.”

            “I don’t…I can’t…” Axin tried to reject her, but the words kept dying in his throat. Something about this lady terrified him, and the room was just as off-putting as the main hall. He desperately looked for an escape route, but there were no windows aside from some stained glass depicting an angelic figure far out of reach, and the only door was the one he came in, blocked by the middle-aged lady and her posse.

            “Do not fear, child, the goddess is generous and merciful,” the prophet assured. “Your early intrusion is already forgiven. In fact, it was a stroke of good fortune that you made your way here. If you hadn’t come here, we might have spent ages looking for you.”

            “What’s so special about me? I’m nobody,” Axin choked out. The rogue struggled to breathe as the atmosphere of the room suffocated him. You’d think such a holy-looking place would offer solace, but this room radiated an incomprehensible presence that shook Axin to his very core.

            “But you are special, you are like me, from beyond this place, from the stars,” the prophet smiled. Axin couldn’t see her eyes as they were hidden behind her hood, but he could feel them piercing right through him. “What you know, what you understand is invaluable in a place like this.”

            ‘I was right, I was right, why? Why?’ Axin cursed his misfortune. He needed to leave...he needed to see the divine messenger…No, he needed to leave, if only after basking in that light again…No, he needed to…needed to… ‘What’s wrong with me?’

            “It is alright, child, you may release those worries plaguing your soul. The divine messenger has come for you,” the prophet gestured above. The stained-glass window shone with brilliant light as the figure depicted in the artwork stepped out of the medium that contained it and took on a physical form. The Divine Messenger descended upon the room, filling it with a blinding light. The prophet and the worshippers fell to their knees in reverence, while Axin couldn’t even move.

            ‘AND SO, BLESSED CHILD, WE ARE UNITED AGAIN,’ the Divine Messenger’s voice boomed into Axin’s mind.

            ‘Get out of my head!’ Axin tried to scream, but could only bring himself to shout within his own mind.

            ‘DO NOT FEAR,’ the messenger reached out their hand as the blinding light faded. Its form fully revealed, Axin saw that it was a feminine, angelic humanoid, with two brilliant white wings on its back, long golden hair, eyes of brilliant silver, and armor he distinctly recognized.

            ‘That looks like Federation soldier armor, heavily modified, but I’d recognize the garb of those pigs any day,’ Axin realized. ‘But why is she wearing it? This ain’t a place the Federation would ever step foot on if they could help it, and I’ve never seen an alien like her…wait no I have once. It was a news article about Barstilin, something about obnoxious new residents on the streets? But what were they called?’

            ‘CYANGELS,’ the messenger answered his thought, causing Axin to flinch.

            “How? How!” Axin stumbled backward as his thoughts were invaded.

            ‘WE ARE CAPABLE OF A GREAT MANY THINGS,’ the messenger explained, ‘AND WE WISH TO SHARE THOSE GIFTS WITH PEOPLE LIKE YOU, BUT WE MUST SPREAD OUR WORD, OUR MESSAGE, OUR DOGMA ACROSS THE GALAXY FIRST. LESS WE RISK BEING IGNORED AND MISUNDERSTOOD AGAIN.’

            “What…what kind of…” Axin could barely speak, his terror taking back over.

            ‘IT IS A SIMPLE MESSAGE, YET DIFFICULT TO CONVEY,’ the messenger continued, ‘IT IS HARD TO ACCEPT AT FIRST, YET MANY SEEM TO AGREE UNCONSCIOUSLY.’

            ‘What is she talking about?’ Axin wanted to throw up.

            ‘WHY TELL, WHEN WE COULD SHOW YOU?’ The messenger spread her wings and took to the air, hovering above the pool. ‘COME, BLESSED CHILD, STEP INTO THE WATER TODAY AND TOMORROW SPREAD OUR DIVINE MESSAGE.’

            ‘What would that do to me?’ Axin stared at the water in horror, finally realizing what about this place was scaring him.

            “It will give you the same blessing that I received,” the prophet appeared behind him and grabbed his shoulder. Her cloak slipped off, revealing she was also a cyangel, one with white hair and piercing gold eyes.

            “Let go, let go!” Axin tried to struggle, but her grip was like a vice, and she dragged him toward the water with little effort.

            ‘ACCEPT THIS GIFT, MAY YOUR COMPONENTS CREATE LIFE ANEW,’ the messenger chanted.

            “What!” Axin’s heart stopped. All this time he had assumed they were going to do something to him, change him in some way. But the way she spoke made it sound like he was fuel in the furnace. A catalyst for something else. This was no baptism, it was a sacrifice. “Stop!”

            “Accept this gift,” the prophet smiled as she dunked him into the water, holding him down as he struggled against his inevitable fate. At first he flailed like a trapped animal, but soon he couldn’t even put a single finger above the surface. His limbs grew heavier and heavier until he could lift them no longer. Then, suddenly, they felt as light as air. He dared to open his eyes and saw something sinking into the water beside him. In fact, there were many scattered pieces in the water with him. However, Axin quickly realized he was still the only thing in the water a reality that ironically became more apparent as his vision decayed before completely cutting out, followed by his last thread of conscious thought.

            “He stopped struggling…oh, he is gone,” the prophet pulled her hand back, finally noticing Axin was no more. She stepped aside and watched the pool with an eager smile as it swirled with his remnants before something began to form in its center. “What new life finds its spark in these waters?” She wondered as a single hand reached out from the water, which was swiftly grabbed and dragged out by the divine messenger. The prophet smiled as she witnessed her new counterpart enter this world.

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            The grand cathedral of Illuxio continued to spread the word of its goddess unabated, and the once enigmatic and vague religion came to be known under a proper name: the Cult of Ambrosia. They promised a new form of immortality, unlike any the people of this humble planet had ever conceived of before, and more importantly, a graceful union of all people and a promise of everlasting peace as long as everyone converted to this new religion.

            However, this was all unknown to the Federation scout Herin. He was here tracking the ship of a small-time space rogue. Normally, the Federation would never bother to send its scouts to such a primitive planet, and in fact forbade it on the grounds of non-interference with less-advanced civilizations. But that goes out the window when you have proof someone else is already doing that. Even then, hunting down such a minor crook like this guy would be a waste of time, but Herin was lucky enough to catch a signal from the rogue’s ship. While he wouldn’t hunt the guy to the ends of the world, Herin at least had to confirm this criminal wasn’t exploiting the local people. If the guy was keeping to himself, he might even let him go free. Alas, the rogue was quickly forgotten as Herin made his first steps into a local city.

            “Our fellows, followers of the faith, we come bearing news of another divine visit,” a twin pair of robed prophets, one in white and one in black, exclaimed to a ravenous crowd in front of a cathedral far too large and complex for the level of technology on this planet. What was even more startling was that their words and actions were being backed up with effects from an Illumin 9000. Herin was distraught at the amount of paperwork he’d be stuck with after this, but also excited he stumbled across proof of the Illumin theft rumors. All he had to do was get a closer look at these mysterious prophets and their out-of-place cathedral, and he’d have enough for a report that would get his superior’s attention.

            “Just a quick 15 cycles of recon and a few pictures and I’ll have more than enough to prove someone is interfering with this planet’s growth. If I’m lucky, I might even get a promotion out of this,” Herin smiled. However, in his glee, he failed to notice that the twin prophets were staring directly at him, even though he was far away at the back of the crowd.

            “Fellow believers, the word of the divine messenger is near,” the twin prophets exclaimed. “Once again they asked for but one more thing before the message is shared. We shall not be the ones to disseminate the message. It will be one of you!” The already animated crowd went ballistic. “Let the light of our goddess illuminate the chosen!” The prophets shouted.

            ‘What kind of nonsense is this?’ Herin thought before he felt thousands of eyes upon him, as an inexplicable light shined directly upon where he stood.

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Tuesday, July 14, 2026

"Free Will is Overrated" - Illusions to the Heavens, Part 1 of 2

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            Axin looked upon the grand cathedral of Illuxio, a massive stone structure which dwarfed everything in the surrounding city. It was practically a work of art compared to the modest wood-and-stone houses that surrounded it. Even the city’s town hall and castle keep were no match for its splendor. The populace seemed to think so too, as countless souls flocked to the region’s new center of religious worship. A spiritual revolution was about to unfold right in front of him, and Axin could think of only one thing.

            “How quaint,” the dusty-haired man scoffed. ‘This primitive little planet was supposed to be quiet and uneventful. It was so far out of the way and worth so little attention that those damn Federation pigs would never spare it a second glance. And I just had to land right at the epicenter of this kooky nonsense. Was this cathedral even here last septocycle[1]? I knew they were building something since I landed, it wasn’t exactly discreet, but they finished this way too quickly for such a backward planet.’ Axin briefly wondered if he should play along with the worshippers to blend in, or if it would be best to keep his distance in case this situation turned from holy revolution to holy war. Before he could make his choice, a mass of people began to gather up around him, trapping him in the crowd as a figure stepped out from the cathedral, adorned in white robes.

            “My fellows, followers of the faith, I come bearing news of another divine visit,” the figure announced. By the sound of their voice, they were clearly a youngish woman, a far bit younger than what Axin expected from a so-called prophet on this planet. At least his universal translator was still working. “Our prayers have been answered, the goddess shall send her messenger to provide me guidance. Today I shall be granted wisdom, tomorrow you all shall be granted wisdom, and the next day the kingdom, and the following the entire known world!” The people cheered, much to Axin’s confusion. All this prophet was saying were vague promises of wisdom. This was a religious leader who took the kingdom by storm this last septocycle?

            ‘Something doesn’t sit right with me, this is all happening too fast,’ Axin thought. “Either that or these people are more gullible, stupid, and desperate than I thought.” He shook his head, counting the seconds until the crowd would finally disperse enough that he could leave. However, his attention was soon drawn back to the white-robed prophet.

            “I promise you, divine blessing awaits us all,” she raised her hands to the sky and suddenly put on an impromptu light show. Glowing balls of light orbited her as she was bathed in a golden aura that gave the illusion that she floated off the ground. The crowd fell into shocked silence before cheering even louder than before. Axin was stunned too, not because of the “miracle,” but because he had seen it before.

            ‘That was an Illumin 9000, it was hot shit about a heliocycle or two ago,’ Axin noted. ‘It’s great at making fancy light shows, but it was stupidly expensive and overpriced for what it did. How the hell did one end up on this backwater planet? I know there was a rumor about a shipment that went missing in the outer rim, but I thought it was nonsense made up during a slow news week. Regardless, either this so-called prophet bought one on their own, stole it, or is a proxy for someone else who did one of the former. Suddenly I don’t feel so safe right now. If the Federation dogs don’t sniff out this tech disparity, the one responsible might sniff me out before long, and I doubt they’re fans of witnesses.’ Axin desperately looked for a way out of the crowd, but found none. In fact, the crowd was moving towards the cathedral now, forcing him to move with them if he didn’t want to be trampled.

            “Hold steady, fellow believers, come pray as I await the divine messenger,” the prophet welcomed in the crowd. Axin cursed his bad luck as he was practically herded inside. Maybe there would be a backdoor or something he could sneak out through once inside. He doubted he’d be getting out the front door anytime within his lifetime.

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            Somehow the inside of the cathedral felt even more massive than the outside, which was impressive considering how claustrophobic Axin felt right now. With how close the crowd was packed in around him, he might as well have been in an airtight can. It would take a divine miracle just to find enough space to breathe, let alone escape this frenzied crowd.

            ‘Well. I’ll be,’ Axin spotted a side hallway ignored by the crowd coming up ahead. If he wanted to escape, he’d have to act now. He could see the main hall approaching fast, and once he spilled out into it, he’d likely have to wait until this whole event was over before he could slip away. With a strong push and a little agility, Axin wiggled his way through the crowd and barely managed to squeeze out into the side hallway. He took a grateful breath of air now that he wasn’t being crushed from all sides.

            “Praise the Goddess, the messenger comes soon.” He could still hear the prophet from all the way back here. That all but confirmed in his mind they were using an Illumin 9000. The speakers on that thing were so powerful they were the subject of controversy, if he recalled correctly. Either that or this girl missed her life’s calling to be an opera singer or a sports announcer.

            ‘Now, let’s hope this isn’t just a dead-end hallway for the bathroom,’ Axin thought as he looked down the long dark hall. While there was a bathroom, there was also an obscured, unmarked door at the end of the hall. Perhaps a service entrance or maintenance area. ‘Hopefully, it’s not just a closet.’

            Axin rushed down the hall and opened the door, which thankfully wasn’t locked, and stepped out into an even larger side hallway that seemed to run the entire length of the building. The self-proclaimed space rogue smiled at his good fortune. There was a way out after all.

            ‘Or maybe not,’ he realized to his frustration that his escape would not be so easy. While the hall did run the length of the building, heading back towards the entrance only led him to an unfinished section of the cathedral still under heavy construction. There were no workers for whatever reason, but there was also no exit. And if there was one, it was blocked by all their equipment and materials. It was fairly rudimentary equipment, all things considered, although the steel scaffolding seemed a little out of place. ‘More alarm bells. Whatever, if I’m really lucky, knowledge of how to build a fire exit is one of the things my fellow visitor brought with them.’

            Axin turned around and trudged up the other direction through the long hallway. The whole area was beginning to disturb him. The out-of-place scaffolding was one thing, but the gradual decrease in lighting was another. He wasn’t sure how this place was lit and had initially assumed it was by candlelight, but the remaining lights on the walls were most certainly not candles. And there were gradually fewer and fewer of them the further he went down the hall. Whatever their method, it was clear neither end of this hallway had been finished yet.

            ‘Maybe this was a mistake,’ Axin considered as the sound of the crowd outside became louder and more audible. The main hall must have been right past the wall next to him.

            “…I go now, the divine messenger awaits!” The prophet’s voice boomed through the hall, scaring the wits out of Axin. It seemed he passed a threshold where her voice was no longer muffled.

            ‘Lovely, I bet the crowd is about to hit a fever pitch,’ Axin shook his head before spotting a better lit section up ahead. ‘Stairs? Where there are stairs, there might be an emergency exit, or at least a window.’ He dashed forward, looking for his salvation, but only found the stairs and another door that likely led back into the main hall. ‘Just great. Okay, new plan, I’ll go up the stairs and climb out a window and then-’ The door opened, and Axin’s heart dropped right through the floor.

            “Hmm, hmm,” the white-robed prophet entered the back hallway and proceeded up the stairs. She just missed Axin, who had tucked himself behind the stairs to avoid her sight.

            ‘Maybe I won’t go up the stairs,’ Axin realized his predicament as he looked back the way he came. ‘Or I could just wander back and forth in this hallway for the rest of my life. Or better yet, I can run up there, jump out a window, land in a bush, run and never look back.’ Axin considered his options. The space rogue quickly decided that he had spent his whole life taking risks, so what was one more?

            Axin slowly climbed the stairs, which thankfully didn’t squeak with his every step. After an agonizing several minutes, he made it to the second floor and was met with a narrow, decorative window. He cursed the universe for mocking him and decided to proceed forward, looking for a room with a larger window. This place was massive, so it stood to reason there had to be some opening up here he could safely jump from.

            ‘Maybe I’ve pushed my luck too far, there’s no way I can…the heck is that sound?’ Axin paused as he heard…something. It wasn’t a sound he’d heard anywhere in his life. It wasn’t a person, technology, an animal, or even the building settling, but something else. ‘Where is it coming from?’ He looked around and saw an ornate door, blinding light bleeding out from beneath it. The prophet’s voice was faintly audible from behind, but so was something else, nearly drowning it out. And tantalizingly, the door was ajar.

            ‘Don’t,’ Axin thought as he stepped closer. ‘I need to go any other way,’ he went closer and closer. ‘I’m not going to like what I see, she’ll spot me, or worse, whatever that is will,’ yet he still came right up to the door and peered through the crack.

            “…And what of the rest?” The prophet asked someone Axin couldn’t quite see yet.

            ‘YOU ALREADY KNOW, YOU’VE ALWAYS KNOWN,’ a voice boomed in Axin’s mind, in sync with the indescribable sound from before. Against every survival instinct, he peered deeper into the room, adjusting his angle until he finally saw them. He didn’t need to make any guesses as to who he was seeing. There could be no doubt. That was the divine messenger. He saw them, and they saw him, and smiled. He was seen, his presence was known, they always knew. He needed to escape, he needed to see more, he needed to flee. Could he flee? As the messenger reached out their hand to him, Axin finally fled, racing back down the stairs and into the dark hallway.

  To Be Continued…



[1] Septocycle ≈ 1 Week

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