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Thursday, July 12, 2018

A Harder Bargain - A Short Story (Sort Of) Sequel [#11]

A sort of sequel to this story: http://30leaves.blogspot.com/2018/06/a-hard-bargain-short-story.html
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            "Five gold pieces," the monocled scholar repeated.
            "But the cover is torn in five places," Atalanta argued. "It's probably only worth two or three gold pieces, at best."
            "Five gold piece," the scholar crossed his arms.
            "Give it up Atalanta," I shook my head, "he's not budging." She did her usual pout, but discarded the book nonetheless.
            "How about this," she pawed through the messy collection of old books and pulled out another dusty tome. "Oh, An Expert's Guide to the Arcana and Beyond," she exclaimed. Like the previous book, it showed clear signs of wear and tear, the cover looked ready to peel off at a moment's notice.
            "Ten gold pieces," the scholar declared.
            "What," Atalanta fumed, "This one's worse than the last one." Despite her protests the scholar remained impassive. I think he raised the price to scare her off, unfortunately he doesn't know how stubborn she can be.
            "Calm down Atalanta," I soothed her. I looked towards the scholar, "do you have anything in here that doesn't cost a month's worth of food?" The scholar pointed towards a small basket on the floor in the corner. It contained more books, but they were in extremely poor condition. Atalanta slid over to take a peek at them, but recoiled in horror at the first book she picked up.
            "How can you sell this junk," Atalanta gagged, "smells like dead caterpillars." While she attempted to waft the smell out of her nose, I looked back at the scholar who maintained a stoic exterior.
            'I'm not liking where this is going,' I thought. I turned back to the still revolted Atalanta, "Come on let's buy books some other time."
            "Yeah, forget your crummy books," she huffed, "you're nothing but a scam artist anyway." I sighed as Atalanta resorted to her favorite insult. Before she could utter another word I shepherded her out of the building. We really need to stop looking for deals uptown. At least we didn't get banned from another store.
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Welcome to the continuing adventurers of Martin and Atalanta as they attempt to navigate such horrors as overpriced goods and jaded shopkeepers. I've wanted to write a follow up to this post since I first wrote it, and this is my first successful attempt. My first try ended up way to cliche, and the second got weird (ie. I tried to make it funny, it ended up really uncomfortable). Regardless, I really enjoy writing these two characters. Mainly because I imagine them as two friends who've known each other forever and could probably bicker with each other from now till the end of time. I really want to write a much longer story for them, I just need to set aside time for it.
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