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Tuesday, February 18, 2020

Enigmatic Fantasies - Blighted Waters Part 3 (Final)

Part 1
Part 2
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           “It’s incredible,” Albert exclaimed as he viewed his life’s work. The man’s younger days were long past him. His head was balding, he was short several fingers, missing many teeth, and his face was wrinkled. However, that was of no concern, because the village had grown wondrously. The shantytown that began as a couple of wooden bridges and platforms built along the giant stone arch now stretched down to the lake below. They had no reason to shelter themselves in Latrec’s sewers any longer. Their village was more than large enough to house the majority of their people.
           “Still haven’t decided on that name?” Gordon joked the remains of the older man’s hair had gone gray, and his beard stretched down to his chest.
           “I still say we should call it Shanty,” Joseph interjected, his smile showed his many missing teeth.
           “It’ll be called what it’s called,” Albert shook his head, “I’m sure they’ll be a consensus eventually.” The aging man took a seat. “Every day I’ve waited for Latrec’s officials to come and remove us, but they’ve never come. Do they even know we exist?”
           “Don’t they’d be so blind,” Gordon coughed, “especially now, there’s no missing us, nor pretending we don’t exist.”
           “I guess they just don’t care,” Joseph shrugged.
          “I certainly hope so,” Albert scanned the wooden shantytown, his eyes observing every resident they passed. As his vision looped back to the outflow pipe that started it all so many years ago, he noticed something strange. ‘The sewer water looks darker than usual, I didn’t realize that was possible.’
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           “The flow of new arrivals has nearly stopped,” Gordon explained. He and Albert had set themselves up in one of the wooden shacks high up in the village. The night was dark, but a small candle lit up their space.
           “More to for reinforcing the structure then,” Albert nodded. “Have that young man from the lowest level do it, he’s strong.”
           “Can’t, he’s ill,” Gordon shook his head.
           “How unfortunate,” Albert sighed, “I’ll figure it out in the morning then.” The aging man yawned, his eyes still glanced towards the outflow pipe. It was too dark to see the flowing water, but he knew the liquid was still cloudier than usual. Suddenly, Albert felt a painful cough overtake him before it passed in a moment.
           “Something foul is going around again,” Gordon wheezed, “worse than usual.”
           “I’d recommend we pull water from further out in the lake for a while,” Albert stated, “just a hunch.”
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           “How’s Gordon,” Joseph inquired. He and Albert stood outside a small shack which housed their mutual friend.
           “He’s up in the years, so the disease is taking its toll,” Albert tried to hide his forlorn expression. “I wish we had a doctor or priest, anything to comfort him.”
           “It was bound to happen sooner or later,” Joseph sighed. “It’ll happen to us soon too, that’s how getting old works.”
           “I guess,” Albert suppressed a lingering memory of his father. “You still teaching those boys your skills?”
           “They’re quick learners,” Joseph chuckled, “the future is in good hands.”
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           “It’s been awfully quiet lately,” Albert commented as he stared out towards the lake. It was cloudier than he remembered.
           “Hasn’t been the same without Gordon,” Joseph coughed.
           “No, I mean in general,” Albert gestured to the village. Still, as full as ever, the shantytown was almost bereft of activity.
           “That sickness is hitting us hard,” Joseph agreed.
           “Not just here,” Albert shook his head, “the flow of new arrivals stopped some time back. It was Gordon’s job to keep track of them, so I didn’t notice until recently.”
           “Think something terrible happened?” Joseph’s concern grew.
           “I don’t know,” Albert replied, “I’m more concerned about the village.”
           “Didn’t I tell you before,” Joseph assured his friend, “the future is in good hands.” He pointed out the few residents still at work, repairing and reinforcing the village. A couple were even expanding the massive shantytown.
           “I certainly hope you’re right,” Albert coughed.
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           The waters had only grown more clouded, darker, blacker, blighted. Albert had initially insisted they pull water from further out in the lake. However, that became less possible as sickness enacted a vice-grip on the village. Eventually, the aging man gave up on the idea, his people needed water, and he felt that soon it wouldn’t matter where they got water from.
           “The future is in good hands,” Albert repeated to himself. The old man had lost almost all his teeth, his head had gone bald, his skin wrinkled, and his body malnourished. His mind briefly wondered where Joseph was until he remembered his friend had died years ago. “The future is in good hands,” he told himself as he rested against the wall next to the outflow pipe.
           It was almost sunrise, but it was so very cold. The old man didn’t know if he had another hour in him. He coughed and wheezed and struggled to keep his eyes open. As his latest attack came to an end, he took a moment to breathe.
           “The future is in good hands,” Albert assured himself. The village’s activity was minimal, but it was there. The population had dwindled somewhat, but it was still quite full. “The future is in good hands,” the dying man repeated.
           Finally, the first light of the sun peeked over the horizon, and a small sense of relief washed over Albert. He allowed himself to close his eyes and rest a little bit. It wouldn’t be much longer.
           “Foolish old man,” Albert mumbled as the sun rose over the horizon.

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Whether or not we leave a lasting mark on the world may not entirely be in our hands, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't try.

Admittedly, I planned on making this a four part story, with the last part covering the event following Albert's death and the village's continued struggles. However, I found that I was taking it in a very negative direction, and that the ending in part 3 felt a little better. Honestly it's a little too vague, but I think that's better than spelling out everything that happens next.

Until next time, Read, Comment and Enjoy
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