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Tuesday, November 13, 2018

Eclectic Narratives #1 - Mistakes Were Made [#51]

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            "This can't end well," I stated.
            "Where's your sense of adventure?" Eric asked.
            "About twenty miles back, with your common sense," I replied.
            "Don't be such a worrywart," he assured, "I know what I'm doing, trust-" Before he could finish his sentence the device in front of him burst into flames. He quickly put it out with his jacket, but he no longer met my gaze. I looked back at the car, it was only ten feet away on the dirt road. The temptation to leave gnawed at me, but I knew better than to leave him alone.
"Okay this time it'll work," Eric pulled out a screwdriver, "just a few minor adjustments and we're good to go."
            "Sure," I took a long step back and ducked behind a tree.
            "Perfect, now-" He began before the device emitted a burst of smoke right into his face. "Never mind," Eric coughed.
            "Can't you just quit while you're ahead?" I asked.
            "No," he snapped, "I can get it working I promise."
            "I'll get the first aid kit then," I sighed, "and the fire extinguisher." I walked back to the car while he continued to fiddle with the device, which only shocked and burned him in response. 

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Very short story today do to a combination of factors. Let's just say the story that was meant to be uploaded today was really dumb that I had to scrap at the last minute, and that's just for starters. Thursday's story should be more substantial.
Until then Read, Comment and Enjoy.

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